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My life was pretty good till I was about 11 thats when my dad gotarrested I still love crime shows but I never thought Id witness areal one or be the cause My dad mainly robbed a couple of stores inmy small town and he did it because he was doing drugs and trying to getenough money to support me It was November and I thought things weregoing just fine like I knew he was doing drugs but I never thoughtanything of it I was with him the night he robbed the gas station downmy street I hugged him right afterwards I had no clue that when hesaid he was putting our dog out meant he tied the dog up and went androbbed It sickens me how easy it was for him to lie to me So ateleven I became depressed I faked a smile after awhile it became toomuch and I thought of cutting little did I know cutting meantstrangling suffocating and starving myself I wasnt even fat butI just wanted to die I was suicidal Any way I saw on tv Id do Ieventually after 6 months of trying to stop didEventually he went into prison like he deserved First rehab hedsend me letters which at first helped a lot and later they just worsenthe pain They were a reminder and after three years I threw them outThey were just words on paper that meant nothing Once he finally gotinto prison hed call I couldnt handle it Id try to make theconversation short but after each convo Id cry because I miss himthe old him and the pain the new him caused It wasnt the sameanymore I never and saw him in prison I couldnt and he didnt deserveitHe is out of prison and rehab fully done My aunts made me go see himthe day he was out it was a painful day that just brought up memoriesAfter the two hours I
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