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Ive wasted so much money on this dress which I looked forward to wearing for so long but here I am running away Running away from what may have been the unsurpassed relationship I ever had Roger was a wonderful guy however marrying him just didnt feel right Maybe its just mental strain or maybe its gods way of telling me theres something more for me Im Karen Kay a 32 year old defense lawyer for KG attorneys Last year I has met Roger a 35 year old officer for NYPD while getting my usual cup of coffee from Starbucks He had brown eyes as deep as the ocean his teeth were pearls from an oyster and his smile was that of an angels I had no change available and therefore was unable to buy my coffee and drove off A couple minutes later I was pulled over by a cop You are suspected of stealing my heart he chuckles while handing me the cup of coffee I had left at Starbucks I usually cant start my day without caffeine and thought you might need this In brief we had a diminutive conversation and exchanged phone numbers That was the beginning of a great relationship Roger was romantic enough surprising me with flowers and chocolate and showering me with gifts of jewelry We were madly in love and then a month ago Roger got down on one knee and proposed to me and I had accepted At the altar I had said to him Im sorry but I cant do this You are a wonderful guy and any woman would truly be lucky to have you but this just doesnt feel right My mind is saying yes but my heart is saying no I ran out of the altar and am currently trying to get away from the horrid place in a taxi Where to the driver says in a thick Indian
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