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I had just stepped through the front door the chill from the frosty November air still fresh on my face as my dad swiftly placed his hand over my eyes We have a special visitor he announced Guess who Frantically I began to rake my mind blurting out numerous possibilities Wrong every time I scanned the room for a suitcase an unfamiliar pair of shoes bottles of wine which my Aunty never failed to come without But there was nothing out of the ordinaryAfter contemplating just about every member of my extended family my dad gradually lead me down the hall First step Second step Third step Fourth step My eyes still covered I heard the door handle turn Then the minute creak as the door was gingerly opened The instant I crossed the living room threshold something boldly hit the top of my legs My dad removed his hand and my answer was A smile grew on my face until it ached I had wanted a dog for as long as I can remember and finally I had one CocoCoco was from the cat and dog home I was always told that you could never be too careful with rescue dogs They can be nervous unpredictable aggressive and noisy to name but a few However Coco was none of the above She was well trained well behaved she did not bark she did not bite she was good with kids and she was good with adults Yet she still had the right amount of liveliness and boisterousness Coco had her problems but she was perfect to me She was all I could have hoped for in a dog Soon after we got her we began to notice some problems She was plagued with bad skin and one of the things I will always remember was the constant scratching She was allergic to an unbelievable seven things compost feathers dust and four types
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