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Tonya is worthy of my praise for many reasons When I was 5 years old she would walk into my room and remind me why I am so important in her life tucking me in for a bedtime story Her tender love and care keeps me motivated still until this day Each and every day my mother does things that inspire me as a young lady she always makes these mother and daughter days when we both go out and have spa day and when we get home well sit by the pool as the sun beams in our faces tanning our bodies and just talk about our week A Mother is defined as one and only By far my mother has to be the most important thing in my life a prime example of how I would like to be when I get olderGrowing up with my mother all my life helped me realize that she would give up anything for me shes my best friend As I sat on the bed next to her I started a conversation about a guy that I had a crush on she grabs her face and laughs then ask me if I think Ill make him my boyfriend A couple of years ago she was telling me always protect my heart because guys are very conniving When it comes to our guy talks our quality time we spend at home at the mall or the days we have study time together Completing work assignments making sure I keep my grades up to par Her willingness to be there for me increases my ambition to want to succeed even more She stares at me and tells me that she is proud that I am maturing the way she raised me My dad calls we both smile and exit the room for dinner Fewer times we commit to different occasions together We love to go to
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