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I was five years old when my parents filed for a divorce A confused hurt child stood at her bedroom door listening to her father telling her mother to leave I just wanted us to be a family and to not argue and fight anymore My brother Justin was all I had we stuck together during this desperate time in our lives All of this changed when I found out we were stuck living with dad because he won custody of my brother Justin and I One cold December day my mom was crying she didnt want to leave her babies but her and dad could not see eye to eye I remember looking out the frigid window watching her put her things in grandpas car That was honestly the loneliest and darkest day of my life After a few months of moms absence I got tired of staying with my dad A young girl needs a woman figure in her life once in a while So on weekends I went to spend the night with my Grandma Ruby Grandma Ruby is my dads mother So you can probably guess what was said about my mom during my stay there I was hurt by all of the things that were said about my mom and I truly didnt know what to believe about her A year or so had passed and I thought my mother didnt love me because of all the lies that were implanted into my head I was manipulated and brainwashed into believing that she didnt want me or accept me as her daughter I was dead wrong because I later ended up staying with my mom every weekend because my mom went to court and fought for me I felt like this was my chance to prove to myself that my mom was not the person my dad grandma and aunts made her out to be This was my opportunity to
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