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They said my father would be the ideal dad for any kid out there Thathe would hang out with you everyday and has the best sense of humor outthere If you needed help or advice it was said that he would be therein the snap of a fingerHis sense of humor was golden if you were upset he would have theperfect joke to tell you to cheer you up He was okay with taking jokestowards him also If you said a joke about him he would laugh witheveryone He loves to laugh no matter what mood he is in or condition heis in Most kids dads arent home half the time or until later at night Mydad made sure he got home five minutes before I did everyday so he couldhelp me with homework or if everything is going good at school Everytime I walked through the door he was in the kitchen waiting for me Idsit down and he would ask me how my day was After homework was done wewould hang out until my mom got home Whether we played video games orif the weather was good go play basketball at the park The best partabout all of this is that my father had a smile on his face the wholetime it wasnt a fake one eitherMy father would be there for me any second of the day Whether you needhelp advice or you upset and need comforting Its as if he hastelepathy between the family So even when I wasnt with him I couldask him for help and he would respond the very same minute My dad is the best man I know he is always looking out for my sistermy mom and I This is the perfect father for anybody can ever ask forHe is the backbone for the family I dont know what I would do if myfather werent there for me everyday He is my perfect dad
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