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My experience on April 16 2007 was a day that changed my life foreverProm its what every high school student looked forward to before theyear ended You would think the prom would be the highlight of the nightand everyone would take that last dance and go home What every studentcouldnt wait for was the prom after party That is how a great nightbegan for my friend Angel and me four years ago but what started outgreat took a turn for the worseBoth of us had made plans to hang out that weekend because we knew itwas prom weekend and that there would be a party We had talked about itall that week what we were going wear what we wanted to drink andwhat time to get there Finally it was Saturday Everyone was gettingall dolled up for the prom and ready to get the night started as wereAngel and I Around ten oclock it was go time got gas for the vehiclebeer on ice camera in hand and plenty of cigarettes We arrived at the party around 1045 and began our night There werecard games drinking games and socializing with everyone I wasnttrying to get drunk and Angel wasnt either the party started to diedown sooner than what we thought and everyone was trying to figure outwhat they were going to do since the party was coming to an end Thensomeone made the suggestion that we go to the bar down close to where myhouse was which worked out great for me being that I only lived 15minutes away So everyone started loading things up and telling thepeople who were not going goodnight Be careful Then the fiftyminute drive beganAfter the long drive we finally made it to the bar Everyone was pumpedand ready to have a great time A lot of the older friends that I hadwere already in there so that made it even better Angel and I bothimmediately started drinking again anything
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