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As a small child I was always with my father Id going riding around with him go to stores with him and Id even be there when hed get tattoos in the living room of our apartment My mom would work during the day so it would just be me and dad until she got home My father didnt have a job but he had a lot of money As a child I never questioned it or found it to be odd I just knew I loved my father even though sometimes he wouldnt be home at night or he was gone for a long time because when he would come back he always tried to make me happy and gave me whatever I wanted Bubble gum pink rooms different colored strollers holding dolls with frilly dresses and a little hot pink Barbie jeep I would drive around the apartment parking lot But one day everything changed I was five years old that day a day I will never forget I remember bursting through the sliding doors excitement racing through me wonder in my eyes and a grin as wide as the moon My father told me to pick something out So I went running through the large building with bright lights and jubilant music playing in the background Toys R Us was like my second home my father took me almost every day sometimes he just took me on whim or because he wasnt home the night before or all the fighting at home or like most times Id bug till hed take meAs I went running through the store I saw all these wonderful contraptions board games and dolls but then I saw it I was in love There right before the checkout was a white metal basket that was filled with clear backpacks with bright pink lining and pink mesh straps But what really captured me was the dopey
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