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Finally today is the day that will change my life It is the day of the royal ball at Prince Charmings castle My sister and I have already picked out our dresses Mine is orange and bedazzled with more feathers than a peacock My sister Anastasias dress is exactly the same but in pink her favorite color The only downside is that they were super expensive but when I marry the rich Prince Charming I can buy all the dresses in the world Its about six thirty and the ball starts at seven oclock We are just now heading out in our horse-drawn carriage and on our way to meet Prince Charming Oh I almost forgot we need to give our maid Cinderella the list of chores she needs to do before we come back home Here you go Cinderella If you cant do everything before we return home tonight thats okay I can try and cover for you I know my mother can sometimes be kind of harsh I said Then she replied Why would I ever want you to cover for me beautiful Cinderella I dont need your help or anyones help The only reason why Im here in this huge house cleaning for you people is because your ugly mom married my dad and is too cheap to hire a real maid This is also a perfect time that I find a wealthy husband Prince Charming and become rich See I try to be nice and this is what I get Everyone thinks that Cinderella is the sweet quiet girl who would never hurt a fly but that is not the case Instead everyone else thinks that m mom my sister and I are the evil ones As I walk towards the carriage I see a little blue lightning bug fly into our house and land on the ground I suppose it was nothing and just keep fantasizing about how
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