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When we think about someone who has made an impact on our lives we often think of a person whom we consider to be a role model or the individual that we would like to resemble I think about my sister Radha who has been the antithesis of a role model and has made a very negative impact on my life She has been the tenacity for me to be hard-working successful and responsible my whole life Eighth Grade was in the past and not a day went by when I did not think about High School I was elated to make new friends to be in a whole new environment and to get a sense of maturity I knew high school would be the most important years in my life because that is where you develop benevolent qualities like responsibility that carry with you into college Radha on the other hand was twenty-two years old refused to find work still lived with her parents and was in her second year of college She was not making an effort to attend her classes and in turn was failing most of them Even though Radha was older than me I felt like I was the older sibling I would be the one to clean up the kitchen after dinner while she would go upstairs to watch her anime videos she adopted a cat for herself but I usually took care of it more than her I would be the one to always listen our parents when they needed one of us to do an errand My parents thought a vacation would lighten the mood relieve a bit of her stress and get things back on track for her but things did not go as planned The whole family except Radha decided to go to Atlanta to see Neema my oldest married sister Neema is kind caring
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