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I think that my step dad Tony is a leader in my eyes Ever since I was a little girl I would always say I wanted to grow up to be like him He is very hard working and he never gives up on anything until he is finished or has accomplished what he was doing He was once my softball coach and he always wanted what was best for us He always made sure we were having fun and also learning at the same time His goal for us was to win games but have fun while youre doing it He has always been there for me through thick and thin He has taught me to never give up on something you love no matter what has happened When I was 5 he got sent to Iraq and was in the Army I thought something bad was going to happen But I knew that he was a very strong man and he knows how to take care of himself He was gone for 9 months and my little sister was born during that He told me that while he was gone I had to take his spot and help I thought he was crazy because I knew I could never fulfill his shoes and do the things he has done for our family But it worked out and we did fineTony was the Chief at the Copiah County Sheriffs Department for several years He has been working there since 1997 Sometimes he would have to leave in the middle of the night to go to work but I knew he was doing it to have money for our family In February of this year he lost his job at being a police officer It broke his heart and ours It took him several months to find another job but I knew he would find one soon He is now working offshore and he
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