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The words on the sign that hung outside the bar gleamed Black Jacks Bar After I jumped off my five-speed mountain bicycle and took off my helmet I confidently walked up to the radiant building I performed a last minute check of my appearance in an outside mirror I slicked back my hair and tucked my tie-dye shirt inside of my tight blue jeans Looking so sexy I was ready to accomplish my goal for the night to be flirtatious and secure a ladys telephone number in hopes of getting a date My eyes surveyed the vicinity for irresistible women At first I did not see any desirable women however my eyes were soon affixed upon a beautiful blonde-hair woman with long legs I decided to approach her I asked her Are you tired She responded in a soft voice No Why do you ask I then answered nonchalantly Because you have been running through my mind all night She erupted into laughter I couldnt understand why she had laughed at my pick-up line which is a famous clich used to get dates I decided that this lady wasnt for me I was a little disappointed but I didnt quit I put more oil in my hair and was ready to proceed I returned to my seat at the bar I needed a drink to make me feel better so I ordered a scotch and water Better hold the scotch As the bartender handed me my drink a young-looking brunette entered the bar She walked in and sat down next to me I had never seen such beauty before I did nothing at first out of fear however I remembered my objective for the night and prepared a speech I slid over to her and said Your feet must hurt She retorted No not really Why Because you just
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