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My trip to Florida was interesting and cool We went zip lining and Ialmost DIED I went swimming and saw a dead jelly fish and also we gotonto this cool trolley ride that went SO fast We also saw a live actBut the best part of it was when we went swimming There were also badthings too like me forgetting my sandalsThe first thing that me my mom and dad did was we went zip lining thatwas also an Alligator Farm that had Alligators when you zip lined Butfor me it didnt turn out so great Our guide was very serious aboutthe dangers of not following the rules and steps Once I my mom and dadwere on the ladder there was no turning back As we were walking to thisobstacle I looked down and noticed that there were five alligators Mylegs were starting to tremble and as I was walking over to a wire Itripped on my shoelaces and was at the edge of the platform and I felta pull on my jacket it was my mom who grabbed me in So once we got offthe platform the tour guide wanted us out and never to go on the ziplineAfter that terrifying experience my dad decided to take us down to theocean so we could swim there So we went to the hotel room and gotchanged into our bathing suits When we got to the beach I of courseran to the ocean like a little child When I jumped into the water Iyelped so loud of how the ocean water was so COLD As I got out of thewater quickly I felt a little weird slimy feeling on my left foot WhenI saw a white kind of fluid color I knew it was a dead jellyfish triedto get it off but the slime was so unbearable to take So I just kickedit off rather than touch it I ran to my mom and dad where
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