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Even Cinderellas perfect fairytale eventually says the end Tall skinny and courteous He was a sweet Christian guy that I had a good deal in common with The perfect guy for me or so I thought My best friend Kyerstin got us together Little did either of us know that not only my once perfect relationship but also our wonderful friendship would soon turn into a terrible nightmareSeptember 10 2010 it was time for me to take a much needed trip to my best friends house just to get away from my house I walked through the door and could already smell the wonderful dinner that her parents always make for me I always have the best food when Im at her house They always make me feel ten times better like Im a part of the family I call her parents mine and her sisters mine my second family We were in her room she was texting her boyfriend and I couldnt even begin to tell you how happy she seemed Thats what started all of this I wanted to be as joyful as she was all the time I wanted somebody that would always make me smile so she came up with what both of us thought would be a brilliant idea and for awhile it was I began to talk to this guy it was amazing perfect like everything was finally falling right into place like it should have done a long time ago I was terrified of what was going to come of this and completely unsure about my decision I could feel myself shaking all through my body everything felt wrong but perfectly fine all at the same timeAs a few months went by everything still seemed perfect but it didnt take long at all to realize that they really werent It suddenly seemed as if everything was going wrong all at the same time I felt trapped like I
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