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Jack rolled down the window of the old 1987 Dodge Ram pickup truck and tossed the cigarette butt out It was bleak November and the cold air rushed into his faceHow we doin for time He asked the dark-haired man driving the truck You know how Mario gets when were late for a deliveryGordy wrenched the steering wheel sharply to the right and turned down a dark street leading to abandoned warehousesDont sweat it man Well make itThey were a few blocks from the Pacific Ocean Rundown buildings beatup chainlink fences with bared wire curling at the top a few desultory dogs crossing the road You could say this was No Mans LandGordy shut the lights and they coasted for hail a block Then he cut the engine cold It was so quiet you could hear Grandma Wheezing in her graveJack bit his lip and said I wish youd go inBut he got out of the truck and gave three sharp knocks on the derelict steel door and this sweet little old lady answered Are you all right I got worried thought somin might have happened to ya No mam where quite alright Well you boys hurry up and unload then come in for sandwiches and chocolate milkJack and Gordy were two of the luckiest men ever To think they were scared of a lady who was not more than five feet tall She had to be the cutest little old lady in town She had these tiny hands that were so wrinkly they reminded you of raisons Her hair was white like a ghost but it was all done up as if she was on her way to the ball She had on these aqua green pants with a white shirt and cardigan You boys hurry on up now its cold out there and I wouldnt want you to get sick nowLets go Gordy The faster we move the faster we can goThe boys
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