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NUMBER 21112 By Danny Hoyt Imagine this A child with 4 brothers and 6 sisters with no dad and not a lot of money He lives in a run down old trailer park He has to decide whether to go to school with his friends or play basketball on an organized team Well heres his story Once upon a time there lived two boys Ramon Thigby and Gregory Clintonet Ramon was a small Mexican boy who lived in a beat-up trailer with his 4 brothers and 6 sisters His dad had run away when he was born so it was just his mom left with the job of taking care of 11 children Then there was Gregory Greg they called him He was a rich boy because his dad was the governor He lived in Raleigh North Carolina Ramon lived in downtown Los Angeles where all he did all day was play with a little tiny basketball that his mom gave him for his golden birthday when he was 7 years old Back then they didnt have hoops like we have today They had wooden baskets that they would tie by strings to a telephone pole On the other side of the country Gregory was busy with an underwater chess tournament He has a basketball court in his room that he got for a baby shower present from the President and his family He had a personal trainer and practiced every other day He was not bad for his age Ramon however could only play about once a week because there were kids at the hoop all the time If he went there while those kids were there they would make fun of him really bad Ramon wasnt as good
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