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Over thirty five percent of people in America are obese I was part of that thirty five percent Being fat I am sure isnt just a choice someone makes it sort of just happens Im not saying that it cant be fixed or helped it just kind of happens due to circumstances Being called a name is something no one really likes Being called fat loser dumb are mean and childish to say the least The last people you would think of calling someone this would be an adult especially a doctor Growing up I will say I wasnt the healthiest of kids I did play spots but I was always the bigger one I was always the linemen never the running back This wasnt always my fault I grew up with asthma and a condition called cyclic vomiting syndrome cvs Growing up with these conditions it really wasnt the best idea to exert myself at all so that left me with staying inside to eat i was in and out of doctors my whole life with my cvs trying to figure out what the best way of dealing with it was I was fine going to these doctor appointments until the first and last time we went to see Dr Anderson Because she wasnt familiar with cvs she told us that I was sick because Im fat and I was probably faking it I could not believe my ears when she told me that Why would a doctor think anyone would throw up for a week for the fun of itA few months had passed and what Dr Anderson had said still gnaws at me was she right am I sick because I was fat Was she right am I making myself sick by being this way Then came the question what can I do to make myself healthy how do I make myself better I could barely run and lets be honest who
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