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Hi Con I draw mustache on faceShe waved a black felt-pen in the air while caring an uncertain-shy grin I was semi intoxicated at the time and was completely caught of guard for I had never spoke to this girl before and now we were exchanging obscured screams under the obnoxiously loud bartenders playlist of Rush Neil Yong Blondy and Lynyrd skynyrd Both her and I had mutual friends and I do believe I had seen her face once before but I was not able to quite pinpoint the place and timeThis was a normal occurrence for me then there were very few days my eyes seen clear Okay Her friend immediately squeaked a tittering laugh almost like a child However for their race this was normal The young slanted-eye girl began to drawl a mustache on my faceI drawl tooHer friend repediatly asked but I was more interested in her at the moment so I nicely declined making up a quick excuse that the girl was doing such a lovely jobWhere are you girls fromNihongoJapan Watashi Wa Namaiwa NandesukaOhhhh Yu know JapaNo no I dont know Japanese well I have only been learning on my own time nothing specialShe immediately smirked which caused a natural smile to shine on my faceI hadnt smiled because of a woman since almost a year from that date especially for no reason I felt the moment we shared even though her and I were unable to fully understand each otherI swear I have met you before Did I see you at Luans place last weekLuon How yu know Luon We love Luon so mani nice I am onsure Lastu weekyup Last Friday night Luan had a big partyumm No I do not think No I em sure I had not see you somewhere before Maybe notMaybe not How is my mustache lookingShe giggled and shyly stared at her friend both smiling because they probably had no idea
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