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Once upon a time there was a little girl called Rebecca She lived with her mom named Sharon and her dad name Todd She loved to play with her dolls and she didnt have a lot of friends Her Parents were worried because she spent most of her time playing in the house with her dolls instead of going outside and playing with other kids One day when Sharon picked up Rebecca she saw scratches and marks on her arm Rebecca tried hiding them but it was too late and she saw them Sharon said Rebecca where did you get those scratches from Rebecca responded saying they are nothing mom I was just scratching my arm then she rolls down her sleeve and walks into the house Sharon lets her go into the house but she is still skeptical about how she got those marks on her arm The next morning when Sharon and Todd wake up they go down stairs to a great surprise The furniture is turned over and re arranged There are glasses broken things out of place all over the floor Sharon screams and it wakes up Rebecca and she runs down stairs Todd says Rebecca dont come down here there broken glass on the floor They search through all the wreckage and surprisingly there is nothing missing besides a box of old childhood pictures of Sharon So the next day Sharon comes home and the house is quiet too quiet She walks up the stairs to see Rebecca Rebecca is in her room talking to someone but Todd is down stairs in his office The door is ajar and Rebecca is facing the wall mumbling something Sharon walks into the room and asks Rebecca who are you talking to Rebecca turns around and says no one mom She starts playing with her dolls on her bed Sharon is worried about her daughter because she doesnt hang out with much friends
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