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Parents Should Use More Caution in the Use of Ritalin for Children

This essay argues that Ritalin should be prescribed with more caution. The student notes that prescription rates have skyrocketed in recent years and suggests that the potential for harmful side effects and the resistance to seeking out other forms of treatment pose a serious problem.
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Bob's feedback:

"This is an important issue and your passion for it comes across well in your essay. Make sure that broad claims you make are supported by outside sources and solid arguments. You make a lot of generalizations, especially about the attitudes of different groups toward Ritalin. These generalizations may not ring true for readers with out some kind of verifcation.

Consider shifting away from the conversational tone that is present in much of the essay. There are frequent errors and awkward sentences that need to be addressed as well."

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