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There is no out of here All hope happiness and self respect have been eaten away by the blue eyed devil in disguise All the secrets I cannot tell make my life a living hell Being trapped in this never ending nightmare is tearing a little piece of me every day The unbearable part is having to face my friends and teachers at school The stunned looks I get as I enter a room the catty snickers I hear from girls I pass in the hall and the repeated questioning from concerned teachers only made me seal my secrets tighter in my little jar It is lie after lie snowballing down the black flamed hill of hopelessness My racing heart is screaming out please take me away but my dead dried lips softly deliver Everything is fine added with a half hearted smile on the side I feel as if I were like a duck in a pond looking graceful and blissful on top of the water but really underneath my legs are struggling to keep afloat As my brothers run inside I stay behind and reside two feet in front of the dark and damaged wooden side door scared for my life I just knew he had been waiting aggressively for me to walk through that cold door My breathing is starting to become heavy and my tiny pale hands begin to tremble with fear as I contemplate making a run for it If I leave now and he finds me I for sure will be put in the hospital this time around Though I know what is waiting for me on the other side I must go in with wishful thinking I have no one to turn to but myself I hold it together by tying my hair in a pony tail and taking a deep breath before I cross over to hell My lifeless eyes look to the beige carpet as I
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