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Some say that the biggest time in a young womans life is the moment she loses her virginity Some people see it as a glorious moment when they become a woman I didnt have much of a choice in the matter The summer of sophomore year I had my first real boyfriend That was also the summer that my virginity was stolen from me It was a moment that forever changed me and it has made the person I am today When I told the people I trusted that I was raped at the age of 15 I expected people to say it was my fault because thats how I felt about it I thought that I brought it upon myself It took a lot for me to realize that no one ever asks to have a gift that precious stripped from them Even now I dont want people to feel sorry for me Thats not why I choose to share this deepest part of me I tell people because I fully trust them and I feel like they should know why I am the way that I am This event has shaped me in both healthy and unhealthy ways I became almost a different person I became the new Kiersten and I wasnt sure how I felt about her The new me had no self-confidence because not only was this boy sexually abusive but he was also emotionally abusive and just a bully He called me fat and ugly He told me I would never find anyone else He made me terrified of myself Anytime I looked in the mirror I was disgusted I still carry this trait with me now Even though I have parents and friends who have always told me how beautiful I am inside and out I no longer felt like
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