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I thought I had answered the why am I here question but it appears like I failed on giving an accurate answer for the same question has presented itself once again I remember my here being here on earth life being like a maze But I wasnt specific enough on where I was really standing I didnt even have a purpose Our purpose is what should keep us motivated in trying to take the right turns in our maze To get where we want to get we should be able to open doors by our decision making process but we are not perfect and we will also take wrong turns and doors will close As I look back from where I stand today I can tell I have come a long way Im not the same ashamed freshy I started off as I am a proud junior from Schurz High School I used to think Schurz was a terrible decision but instead of letting more doors closed on me I tried to open some by making the best of what I was given Its the reason why I am where I am here todayWhen I heard Schurz many negative adjectives came along with it and I didnt want to be part of it The path I wanted to take was to attend one of the top high schools but sadly I was off by a few points in the selective enrollment test I was disappointed in myself that when freshmen year started I didnt felt the need to care about my grade But as I look back there is a decision that helped me get back up it was Avid To be an Avid student it requires some things like having a binder and having a 30 GPA or higher At least those were the things that helped me the binder made me become more organized and knowing what a GPA was helped me
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