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Many people have their own Golden Ages It is like a dream that a person would like to live out Many of these dreams tend to be similar to a utopia or a perfect world Due to the fact that their Golden Age is a perfect world most of these dreams are a little bit on the unrealistic side Most of them never come true However I am not so picky I would make the best attempt to make my life the best it could be and also knowing that it could come true and still be on the realistic side You have to understand that when people come up with their own Golden Age heshe usually takes their life and alters it to a stage where there is no similarity between reality and their utopia I would do something a little bit different You see I would take my pre-existing life and just make changes to that If I were to come up with my own Golden Age this is what I would do I would start with my present standing in life That would be a tenth grade student in high school Then to make it dream like I would analyze to see what I could do to make my life better I would find out what things were important to me at that time and what things I could change to make my future life better For example I would probably start out with school since that is very important to most people at my age There are pretty much two things that are important to kids around my age the social aspect and the academic aspect I would not change my personality but I would rather like to be friends and get to know other people I dont know now Maybe it would be neat to be the King my senior year Also
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