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Throughout my 18 years of life I have lost numerous friends also gained quite a few new friends No matter how many times someone comes in and out your life family is always going to be there for you Thats why the saying goes blood is thicker than water Family is forever rather than friends disappear A few years ago I began wondering do these people that Im surrounded by support me genuinely and if they influence me positively The only people who qualified for that category were of course my family My mom has always been the serious one of the family and Im glad she was because if it werent for her I wouldnt be the over achiever person I am today I was about 5 years old and every time I would try to act out in public my mom would always give me this serious tone of voice and I would know to straighten my attitude up If she didnt give me that deliberate output I wouldnt be serious Id be one of those teenagers that dont take school serious at all Thanks to her support I have made it to college and I havent been absent to school since the 2nd grade I wouldnt have that achievement of not being absent if it werent for her The best part about her is how genuinely she cares I love how whenever I am stressed about something she always knows exactly what to say to keep me motivated On the other hand my dad is like that too he also knows how to make me smile on an off dayThrough many disagreements and pity arguments my dad and I had I have finally found the courage to say to him you were right He knew that I was going to be like him but I keep telling him differently Now Im dedicated to my job just like he is which I
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