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Why Prison Reform Isn't Enough

This persuasive essay argues that various criminal justice approaches, ranging from retributivism to the therapeutic model, fail in taking action too late. The student proposes the focus shift from prison reform to prevention programs that emphasize education and economic equality for all.
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This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Bridget's feedback:

"I really appreciate the clarity of purpose and argumentation in this essay; by providing a roadmap for the reader of the paper's goals and approach, your audience can focus on the ideas with an understanding of how it all fits together as they go.

I suggest the main task for the next draft is in integrating sources. In the case of the introduction, signal phrases or citations will establish ethos and help the reader comprehend your work with the literature. In the body discussion, incorporating research will help move some of the broad claims away from unsubstantiated hypotheticals or generalizations. Finding sources that describe those behaviors, etc., will solidify the readers' understanding of these issues as urgent and real, and the solutions as actionable and viable."

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