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Tommy Doles a high school senior stands at a staggering 65 and 260lbs Doles is seventeen years old and is the second oldest of four siblings in his family Additionally his dad is a sportscaster for a local news stationHe attends Grand Rapids Christian High School in Grand Rapids Michigan and starting left tackle on his football team Doles led Grand Rapids Christian to a Michigan state championship in football during the 2012 season Football isnt Doles only passion he is also involved in several different organizations at his high school including student congress peer listeners and a brass quintet Doles is breaking stereotypes with his football talent unique patriotism and inspirational humblenessFrom the first day he set foot on a football field everyone knew he was set for something great Doles started playing football in the 5th grade and even then he was bigger than most kids I was always taller than the other kids and usually a bit heavier but I was lean growing up said a reminiscing Doles He would continue that tread turning into the thundering 65 behemoth he is now Doles got off to fast start in high school as he started on his varsity team as a sophomore As his high school career was under way he never thought that he would be good enough to go a Division-1 football program but one of his coaches did In the spring of my freshman year my coach told me I had the potential which surprised me said Doles At first Tommy didnt believe him but once an offer from the University of Michigan came that doubt vanished Doles is the first football player from Grand Rapids Christian to ever get a football scholarship from the University of Michigan Other colleges soon followed suit by the likes of the University of Iowa State and Northwestern University After a long drawn out process Doles decided on Northwestern University The opportunity to go
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