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I remember my first experience whitewater rafting quite often I envision myself nervously and hesitantly boarding the raft and the water reflected in my brothers excited eyes I wonder why we foolishly rafted class four rapids our first time out have you ever on impulse done something you thought you would never do My first impulse to do something somewhat extreme became a huge part of my lifeI recall that day quite vividly Day four of our vacation in the beautiful Smoky Mountains of Tennessee I awoke to the sound of a large beeping green garbage truck gathering resort trash around nine oclock I heard my family awake deciding the days activity I smelled eggs and bacon frying on the stovetop and biscuits baking in the oven I joined them for breakfast and noticed them viewing outdoor adventure brochuresDude weve got to try whitewater rafting today It looks awesome I wanna flip the raft my younger brother Gene exclaimed He will try anything without knowing the risks tell him to light himself on fire jokingly hell probably do it to make you laughI timidly obtained the brochure and read about a three hour whitewater rafting trip You spend two hours rafting mostly class three and class four rapids and one hour preparing There was little debating on the issue Very excited we called the company made an appointment and dressed in river clothes While getting ready I heard Gene yelling Hurry Youre gonna make us late Why are you taking so long getting ready just to get dirty again Less than ten minutes had passed since my father made a reservation and he was already yelling I wanted to smash a ceramic plate on his headTwenty minutes later we began our journey During the hour long drive I noticed many breathtaking views Every time I looked out the window I saw the raging river flowing through the beautiful lush green trees along the mountainsides I
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