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License is a key to freedom and a huge milestone for the teenagers as well as big accomplishment for them Their excitement after getting the license is just unmeasurablebut this excitement lead to many accidents and deaths Many of us have seen the drivers speeding in congested traffic weaving between lanes most of them are teenagers that are not mature enough to get a license or drive Their excitement of freedom put lives of many people at risk A number of laws are passed to put restriction on teen drivers and increase their driving age and the time has come to push for their passage Driving age is needed to be raised because drivers because teenagers driving is causing accidents deathsenvironmentalproblem economical problems and health problems that are impossible to solve unless strict actions are takenTeenagers are not mentally mature enough to drive on the road They are not mature enough to take such a big responsibility Research has shown that teenagers brain is not developed enough to drive RecentlyNational Institute of Health NIH using brain scan to see that teenagers were not fully developed-particularly the portions that regulate risk-taking and impulse control crucial to driving The reason ofteenagersimmature act is their undeveloped brain which doesnt develop until they are 20 years old or moreAs in a research by scientists at The National Institute of Mental Health NIMH using magnetic resonance imaging MRI found that the teen brain is not a finished product but is a work in progressACT for YouthSimilarly according to Dr Jay Giedd of The National Institution of Mental Health NIMH has reported that brain maturation does not stop at age 10 but continues into the teen years and even into the 20sACT for YouthScientists and doctor research shows that teenagers are not fit for driving because of their undeveloped brain and immaturity Many comparisons have been made to see the difference in adukts and teenagers brain and all had the
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