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reaching back for something that isnt thereyou suddenly feel you no longer careyour once soft feelings are hard as stoneand in your decisions you are now alonepages ripped out of your book of lifethe same as being stabbed with a butcher knifetheres no direction dont know whos the bossfrom an A to a C student you have turnedthe ripped out pages have now been burnedyou lost your smarts and you lost your mindyou feel stuck out a one and only kindsome good dirrection must soon be foundyour life is gone in one quick glanceyou picked the wrong door and must pay the costof being confused and yet still lostthis beautiful sight makes you faintlove is overwhelming fear is out of sightyou squeeze your loved ones you hold them tightthen everything suddenly begins to fadeyou find yourself in a very different placethen a ghostly figure approaches youyour temperature quickly begins to riseyouve heard of this place you know it wellyoure stuck down in the pits of hellthe figure tells you to sin wheneverhe says to be mean to talk in ugly wordsafter all the word live is evil spelled backwardsthen once again things fade in a hurrya new bright light shines into your eyesits the kind of thing that makes you crythe visions and figures you saw are goneit seemed so real but Im glad its notbecause now Im thankful for what Ive gotno need to be scared it was just a dreamthough you can tell youre home by the morning frostyou still have no direction you are still lost
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