Reasons Why the Iliad by Homer Is a Morality Play
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"Your analysis is on point regarding how the Iliad is a morality play; however, your third paragraph is on the longer side in comparison to your other paragraphs, which throws the flow of your essay off a bit. To remedy this situation, you can break your third paragraph into two smaller paragraphs when you transition from talking about Achilles to other supporting characters in the Iliad. Some revision is needed to correct writing convention errors. You have a tendency to write run-on sentences when using the word "however," and the term "gods" is typically written in lowercase. "God" is capitalized when referring to a monotheistic religion's supreme being. There's a glaring typo with the word "people's'," and making more use of hyphens and commas would streamline your writing and improve the clarity of various statements."
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