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English is my second language with many difficulties that I faced them in twolast years I moved in United States In my homeland we didnt write as structural as here Writing was my favorite because I have talent to write about general and specific things We didnt have something like thesis plan of development topic and supporting detail So writing in United State was a big challenge for me During the semester I frustrated many times with my grades and thought I couldnt go up any more because there was a very big difference between ESOL 40 with other language people Sometimes I recognized about why Im here and studying with this crazy language that I couldnt be good at all in contrast I faced with my beliefs and challenges that helped me to focus on my mind to write an essay with these difficult subjectswith no experience as narrative essay business essay and all argumentative essays It makes me proud of myself to write something I never thought I can do in end of this semester and improve my writing skills have learned my challenges and discovered strategies to overcome the challenges There were many difficulties that I faced in English 49 One of the biggest was writing about argumentative essay which I did not have any idea about it I tried to understand how can I argue andwhich side I have to choose Sometimes I was very worried of providing well supporting details for the topic in my side and belief Also I was feared of not having good strong position on one side For example in in Government Laws on Obesity essay I argued the laws for prevent obesity is effective Converselyquote from sources on my opposite side that made my essay unclear I thought that have to stay and explain my position so in the revised paper I removed the wrong quote and found something argue my side much better Therefore
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