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It was a cold school night and I was visiting my grandparents house I was about fourteen or fifteen years old I was given the option to either spend the night over my grandmothers house or to go home I chose to go home My dad came to pick me up When we went into the house my dad checked the phone and instantly got angry He called my mother and they started arguing all I heard him say was Who is Brandon Oh is that your boyfriend Thats whose always calling here I also heard my mother fussing back but I couldnt make out what was being said After he hung up the phone he left his set of keys on table When my mother came home she explained everything and informed me that she wasnt cheating on him but that he was cheating on her and he only accused her because he was guilty She also told me that they were getting a divorce I couldnt believe my ears I wanted to go in my room and stay there forever How could they get a divorce They loved each other I felt like all of this was my fault I had a choice to stay over my grandmothers house but I chose to go home If I wouldve stayed none of this wouldve happened In school I started talking back to teachers and doing less work I didnt study much like I did before so my grades begin to drop tremendously I even started putting the blame on my teachers and telling my mother that the teachers couldnt teach when asked about my grades Detention became my new hang out and I started hanging with the wrong crowd I started eating everything in sight when I thought about my parents divorce which caused me to gain a lot of weight I just felt depressed and still blamed myself for what happenedI was
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