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Everything feels like a dream I dont know where I am I can hear sobbing and soft music as I lie there I must be asleep in my bed waiting for my moms soft voice to come tell me that breakfast is ready I smell flowers Mom must have cut some fresh roses from the garden today She always tried to put some in my room so my room would smell nice when I woke up I attempt to wake up but opening open my eyes is like trying to lift a two-ton rock They wont budge I must be tired from the game The football game was so intense It was the first home game of the season and the crowd was so enthusiastic I screamed and cheered so loud that I lost my voice The party afterwards took all the energy that I hadnt used at the game But for now I will give up and continue to lie in this dream-like state My body obviously needs to rest My thoughts are directed back to the crying and to the faint music I hear a sound like a preachers voice His tone is morbid He is speaking in such a mono-toned voice that I can hardly make out what he is saying It sounds as if he is praying Mom must have the Christian channel on again She always watches it on the Sundays we cant make it to church He sounds so sad but his tone seems to brighten as he begins to speak about Heaven He talks about the glorious golden gates the perfect beings and the peace that no human can understand peace that I feel I am beginning to experience Now the preacher is silent I guess the show is over As I wait to see what show Mom will watch next I hear someone else begin to speak The voice is that of a young females She
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