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Little did I know about the world and its danger that can happen during any kind of active sports My story takes place at a park when I was in Korea during sixth grade It was a Sunday day afternoon I was riding my bike with my friends in the park At the park there was a really big ramp my friends and I never used We all decided to do something new I tried to do a 360 back flips from the ramp My friends told me not to do it but I argued with them that I wanted to try something new It was really hard for me to decide whether to do the trick or not because once I fell down of that ramp I would be in great injury but if I made it I will be very proud of myself I struggled choosing whether to the back flip or not After about 40 minutes I decided to do the trick I went 50 feet behind the ramp and started speeding up really fast Ten feet before arriving at the ramp I realized I had my phone in my pocket It was a big problem because we wear really loose pants like sweats because of our comfort Once I went up the ramp my phone would fall down so I tried to stop I tried to brake but I stopped in mid air I fell down and bumped my elbow in the concrete My phone fell down also my bike landed right top of me I slowly stood up pain rushed through my elbows I could not move my hands It was a catastrophe for my friends and meMy friend called the ambulance and I went to the hospital I
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