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For my 16th birthday I decided not to go through the hassle of throwing a large party Instead I decided to hang out with a few close friends At least that was the plan until one afternoon during some free time in my astronomy class when I decided to randomly check my personal email At first I expected just mail and other rubbish sent along with them but my inbox was empty all except one unread email from my aunt Amy with New York as the subjectI have been obsessed with New York since before my toddler years and once I got into high school my wonder about the city intensified when I decided I wanted to go to Syracuse University and no other college could compete with my wanting to attend that school The reason why is still a question yet to be answered My first initial thought about the email was curiosity I was wondering if the email Amy sent me was a mistake or perhaps pictures from her trip to New York in the previous year I opened the email and nearly fell out of my chair My aunt was taking me to New YorkMy aunt is a tall slender women who looks younger than her age and a heart thats bigger than her dreams I look up to her in more ways than anyone realizes She has been successful in everything that she has strived for in her life and for her my aunt with the long straight brown hair and the green eyes with the one thats half brown deciding to fuel the fire of my love for New York made me realize how much she was willing to sacrifice for me her niece People say that you are born with a purpose to do in your life there is one thing that you are made for I believe that I am here for not one big thing but
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