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Ill never forget two years ago when I brought my dog Nina home I wason my way to choose a puppy from a dog owner In truth I wanted toadopt a rescue of any age However I finally decided I wanted a dogfrom the age of a pup first because my goal was to attempt to cultivatethem I considered training Nina would be easy Boy was I mistakenEasy Not exactly true It was a sunny spring day in May the sun shining extremely bright andthe humidity causing your clothing to feel sticky I was going to thedog owners house who I found on a puppy adoption site I wasaccompanied by my sister As I approached the gorgeous house and steppedin I was led through the hall and into a room full of severalPomeranian puppies in a crate I think back to that day now andremember her as a diminutive adorable yellow bundle of fluff Arentall puppies cute How could I choose which puppy I was going to takehome This puppy caught my attention when she shimmied her way throughthe other puppies to the front of the crate vying for my attention Aglimpse of another puppy caught my eye Glancing upwards I saw anotherdog that was a replica of her her identical brother Including severalother pups that were much smaller in size and younger in age Herbrother sat there attentively but was then pre-occupied when the smallerpuppies started to play with his ear I stared down at the puppy thathad walked up to me who was now wiggling back and forth and happy togreet me She wanted to play With little round black eyes looking atme shiny golden blonde fur and a small bushy tail I immediatelyloved her Straight off I told the owner This is the dog I want During another Sunday day weeks later I enrolled Nina at a DoggyTraining class with other pups The training room was a large room
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