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I remember my first day at AMCA in 5th grade where I had transferred to from Summit Hill I was very nervous and I wondered if anyone would like me My new headmaster dropped me off at the trailer where my class was and I had an organization and preparation meeting with my new teacher Mrs Rose When she said I was ready a sudden amicable sense came into me That day turned out to be my favorite day of the year I also remember my Student Council teacher died of Leukemia She was the only teacher I liked in 4th grade and same with all the other students Everyone cried Somehow I stayed tough and encouraged all the people around me in whatever way possible As torn as I was I was still amicable I mostly remember Easter when I was 8 years old My friends Kyle and Lexi were walking up to my front door when I hear a blood curling scream Almost seconds go buy when I hear my door bell ring Lexi standing at the door with a bloodshot face politely says Mrs Kent I dont mean to interrupt but there is a huge snake on the driveway Being the nature boy I was at the time I was very excited to see this snake and be able to show off my zoo camp skills to all my aunts uncles and grandparents When I come out with my shoes on I come to see my Grandpa standing there with a shovel I wonder why he is doing this I thought I ask him Why are you about to kill that snake I asked A short reply comes Its a copperhead If you dont want to die dont move any closer I stepped back contemplating my feelings for a snake that eats rats which is good for the flowers in my yard and a snake that would kill me I look
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