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Finally 500 out of work I start towards my car and I think about finally getting home Icant wait to get in the cool air conditioning and away from all my annoying co-workersI open my car door jump in turn on my music full blast and start driving away Idecided take a different way then usual because it was rush hour My favorite song comeson the radio and I begin to sing All of a sudden I stop a car keeps whizzing in and outof all the cars in front of me Out loud to myself I say What an idiot Then the carstreams across two lanes of oncoming traffic hits the curb and flips Wow I didnteven think to stop Shaking I just kept driving Then my childhood memories just flashedthrough my mind I was thinking about how I use to perceive things in my head a whileago I thought about how pain and suffering use to scare me to deathI continued to drive and I let go of the steering wheel with one hand for a secondI started to feel my neck I felt two scares and I remembered when I was a baby with achin the size of a football My mom and doctors called it a tumor but I didnt understandthen I just wanted people to stop starring at me I finally had surgery and it was asuccess After a year or so my chin was normal and I began to be a kid again I thenstarted to hang out with all the guys in my neighborhood All the tough guys I might addThey all thought they were unbreakable I feared for all of them I never wanted people tostare at me for something I never wanted to be in pain and I never wanted people to seeI remember playing sports all he time I feared I would get hurt but I just playedanyway My soccer game ended one day and
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