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My wife Rhiannon is many things to me a life partner a teacher a mentor a guide but most of all she is my soul mate She is the kind of person that will give her last dollar if she knew it was going to help someone in need When someone is in need of a friend she always there willing to listen and help if she can She the kind of person that does not take no for an answer when she know she is right When we first began dating I was in horrible shape I was drinking heavily chain smoking and greased filled hamburgers or inmate trays When we moved in together she saw me as I was and had a better insight on my health She explained to me that I was killing myself and she would not stand by allow it to happen She began to help me better myself by getting me to quit smoking cut down on my drinking and eat a home cooked meal She also saw something in me that I never knew was there She saw the potential I had inside of me waiting for me to realize it was there wanting to break out and excel at everything it came in contact with because of her that happen I began to excel at everything at work so much I began to get recognitions from my supervisors She helped me become the man I am today respected by my peers and looked upon by other for advice Through her I have pushed the limits of my ability and kept going To me she is my lighthouse shinning a light across the dark sea guiding me to become better she is also my rock keeping me steady and strong when times are tough To others she just Rhiannon Griffin but to me she the world
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