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The platform I have chosen is children aging out of the foster care system and same-sex couples right to adoption The foster care system is just a way society has chosen to deal with child abuse neglect and no one wants The foster care systems were designed to be a short-term solution Many children arent getting the help needed The system has failed since so many children need help When they reach eighteen sometimes twenty-one of the children has a disability they become part of the age out population Since the solution is short term why not look for other places for the children to live Same sex couples can be the answer to the problem I dont see why the system lets a persons sexuality determine their parenting skillsThe children aging out of the foster care system are on the rise This seems to be the population at risk in the United States today I have estimated that there are over 20000 children close to aging out of the system Theres many of the children have been neglected and received a wide range of abuse This is not just a statement but just one of the many facts I can remember growing up in the foster care system until I was adopted at the age five I had the chance to learn a lot about many of the children in the foster care by their actionsMany children in the foster care system reach the age of eighteen or adulthood and finally age-out Most of the children end up homeless due to the fact theyre never adopted or biological families to care for them A child has no support or someone to care for them They lack job training skills lower education levels All these issues will make the children struggle just to make it in society Many of the aged out children move for the foster care system to the public assistance system I
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