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Driving across the bridge over Lake Ray Hubbard one sunny Saturday afternoon I was overcome with the gentle breeze blowing through my open window and decided to stop for a little while I pulled off the highway and parked the car Upon exiting the car I walked to the edge of the water and sat downAs I sat on the warm sand I began to pick up handfuls of the sand and let it slowly filter through my open fingers I also became aware of the activities going on around me A man to my left was baiting a fishing line with a minnow Once he had the line baited he gave a mighty cast of the rod and launched the line into the sparkling water He then sat down in a green blue and white striped lawn chair to wait on a fish to catch his bait The gentle bobbing on the water was mesmerizing and I had to look away before I nodded off to sleepOff to the right was a cove with sandy beaches Several boats were anchored in the cove One of the boats was a large with cabin cruiser with green accents Two men and two women were on board The two men tied air mattresses to the side of the boat and the women proceeded to lie on the mattresses for a little sunbathing One woman had long blonde hair and wore a hot pink bikini The other woman had short brown hair and wore a black one-piece bathing suit The two men brought out a football and started tossing the ball to each other They were running up and down the beach tossing the ball back and forth Before too long several teenage boys approached them and they all played football The man on my left suddenly sat up a little straighter and I noticed that the bobber on his fishing line was repeatedly being dragged under the
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