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Year Round Education Should Not Be Implemented in American Schools

This essay argues that year-round schooling would be detrimental to students. The author argues that schedules could be hard on students and parents and could increase the costs associated with keeping the school running.
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This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Bob's feedback:

"You make a lot of convincing arguments. Make sure each argument is supported, ideally by outside sources as well as your own reasoning. You make assumptions that are not directly supported. For example, it's obvious that year-round schooling will require that staff be hired for the whole year, but it doesn't necessarily follow that this will necessitate overtime or contracting outside the school's staff.

Your thoughts are well-organized and you have a solid intro and conclusion. Once you've worked on shoring up your arguments and presenting them clearly, be sure to proofread to clear up small errors and you will have a strong paper."

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