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Brandon is a first year college student taking the laid-back route as most of his High School classmates would describe as lazy in his ongoing achievement of a higher education by attending Brookdale Community College For being known as the person in high school that always hosted animal house like parties and being in direct contact with a supply chain for alcohol in town Brandon was a people pleaser In a mirror he saw himself as the go to guy who hosted outrageous parties Brandons parties would always turn out the same hed see a make-up wrecked - half naked girl holding on to a toilet as if it was the edge of a cliff from drinking too much Brandon had an ego grander than the naked eye could see space from earth The ego was not the only thing Brandon was seeing through a mirror However inside himself a war between his caring heart and impractical mind raged on undetected to his fellow peers Despite hosting countless underage drinking parties having a bright spotlight once hovering over him and taking any risk to please a crowd Brandon was depressed Brandon detested intoxicating himself and he didnt appreciate his friends actions towards young women as they were being taken advantage of for being profoundly intoxicated The energetic yet dangerous individuals Brandon surrounded himself with were only in his life for what Brandon had to offer Brandons realization came and went to that fact however he continued to pursue these friendships due to his fear of being alone Behind the scenes at home Brandons family was coping with the diagnosis of Bi-Polarity of his father and the repossession letters received on a daily basis Brandon lived on a vast property with a wrap-around driveway leading up toward his 3 story orchard painted home where his familys lives seemed like a fairytale Taking 3 Caribbean vacations a year money seemingly falling off trees and every desire fulfilled
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