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I had been following her for what seemed like forever Jumping over trickling creeks and ducking under tree limbs following close behind the footsteps of my big sister Are we close yet because mom and dad should be expecting us back at the campsite before dinner I questioned anxious to see what she had to show me but also wanting the comfort of knowing my parents were near me Relax were almost there I promise it will be worth it Maddie That same moment we turned the corner and there flowed a stream and over it stood a small wooden bridge I came to a hault and stood there just looking at it Wow was all I was able say We deeply immersed in the woods surrounded by the autumn reds and oranges displayed on the trees A family of raccoons scurried away after their drink of water and disappeared into the woods Scampering among the trees was a squirrel desperately searching for food to store for the long months ahead Birds were signing cheerfully among trees and there was an occasional splash from a frog diving into the clear depths of the water I know Isnt it great The thing is though this isnt the best part With that she strode down to the edge of the stream slid off her flip-flops rolled up her jeans and stepped in the water She turned around and looked at me with anticipation Im not going in there if thats what youre waiting for But she just continued to look at me and I knew that she would make sure I end up in that water either by force or willingly so with that I followed her lead and with my shoes on shore and jeans rolled up to my knees I descended into the water A chill was sent up my spine the moment my foot touched the water and even though the stream only
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