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The truest expressions of caring can take pure courage Ive learned this through experience multiple times in my life but the moment that meant the most to me and took the most courage happened very recently Theres a girl in my life named Ralitsa and although Id go to the moon and back for her Ive only had a scarce opportunity to prove it Just last summer was the time I would be able to She had informed me months ago that she planned to do a triathlon at her local park district Knowing her for years shes never done anything quite like that and ever since she told me she invested in herself greatly to be able to complete this goal I was so proud of her but because she lives in Oswego and I live in Hinsdale I knew I would be unable to show my true support Not only that but it was clear because of the color of my skin her parents would never approve of our relationship nor would they allow me to show any support or encouragement Despite having the circumstances against me I had a plan and I was not going to allow circumstances to impede my show of support any longer The night before I took the time to do some online searching from the search I found where the event was happening and the format of the race I was going to cheer my head off for number 95 I made her posters to help cheer her on not only that but I stuffed the pinkest bag I could find with things I knew she would enjoy a massager for her neck problems pink ribbon for her hair a shirt of mine a pink whale from the Shedd Aquarium the Dr Seuss book Oh the places youll go a tall can of diet coke and the most encouraging card I could get my hands on The
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