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Vroom I was on the X-Flight at Six Flags As I rode on therollercoaster I could hear air rushing past me like Ive justBASE jumped I felt like I was going to plummet to theground when the X-Flight pulls up Ahead of me is what I thinksmoke but as we go past that smoke is actually water vaporTiny drops of water go on my skin Thats when I think that Iwas going to die In front of me was a small car sized squareAs we go toward it I was scared but at the last second we do aturn sideways and we go past the square At the end of the rideI realize that the ride wasnt as fast as I was told bymagazines about the X-Flight But who cares that ride wasAWESOME This was the best day at Six FlagsThe day has just begun and I am already tired with my cousinsand friend We stopped by a shop and bought drinks I sawimmense rollercoasters the size of two cruise ships Then atthe beginning of the ride there was a lanky line of peoplewaiting like a bunch of ants in a line There were tons ofadults teens and kids pushing their way through the streetslike they were picking up a MacBook Pro they just wonSomepeople were wearing clothes that they wore during church butothers were wearing clothes that they wore to an art studioParts of the theme parks rollercoasters were coloredbeautifully unlike the American Eagle and Dark Knight whichwere colored with plain colors including black and white Bitsof the rollercoasters were old and I saw that paint was wearingoff but the X-Flight was colored like it just came out of thebox There was a water park where I saw the Hurricane ridethat looked like a sideways toilet and other normal slidesthat were pretty colossal Otherwise the theme park is vastcolorful and had dull colors in a few placesThe noise at the park was like the
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