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Im nine years old are you sure they will let me on the rides Iasked as I worried about being able to ride the roller coasters at SixFlagsYeah why would they not let you ride the roller coasters my momrepliedWell because Im only nine I explained Dont worry said my momas she reassured meIt was my first time going to Six Flags and I was really nervous Icould not believe we were actually going I was so excited that Icouldnt wait to leave Before that day I had always seen commercialson the television about Six Flags It seemed like such an exciting timeon all the commercials I had been waiting all day and anticipating onleaving for Six Flags It was finally time to leave The people that were coming with were mymom my sisters my friend and his mom The car ride took about an hourto get there When we got there I just could not wait But first ofcourse we had to get something to eat So the rides had to wait a littlelongerIm not even hungry I kept telling my mom Although I was secretlyhungry I did not want to eat I was too worried about going on therollercoaster Is everyone done eating I asked impatiently Calm down my sister blurted outFinally I thought to myself as everyone was throwing away theirgarbageOk which ride should we go on first my sister asked RagingBull everyone screamedWe walked around for a while until we finally found the ride I was soanxious to get on the ride The line to the Raging Bull was so long thatwe went to look for another ride The next ride we found was theAmerican Eagle but that line was just as long as the Raging Bulls lineWe decided to stay in the Raging Bulls line We were making our way up to the front of the line very slowly It hadbeen about forty-five minutes when we started to notice rain
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