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Speakers Should Not Be Banned in Public Universities

In this argumentative essay, a student explains why controversial speakers should be welcomed at public universities. The student discusses how such institutions are public forums and how the First Amendment protects controversial speakers and students.
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Angela's feedback:

"You make your stance clear and arranged your paragraphs in a logical manner, but repeated problems with parallel structure in various statements hinder the flow of your writing. In addition, your use of both "the First Amendment" and "Amendment I" is distracting; it would be better to use one term consistently throughout the work. You're also missing citations for some of your direct quotes. When it comes to punctuation in relation to a quote, a period typically appears before a closing quotation mark unless you've got a parenthetical citation at the end of a statement. When you have a parenthetical citation associated with a statement, the period is placed after the citation itself. Review of the work is recommended to fix typos such as "that that public" and the appearance of "now" instead of "not." Your use semicolons and commas should be revisited because you have a tendency to use them incorrectly and in distracting ways."

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