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There I was sitting on the green uncomfortable couch My hands were sweating while my knees were shaking uncontrollably What did I do wrong Was I going to be grounded for the rest of the summer Ive been a good girl doing what I am told to you and not getting into trouble So why did my dad saying those scary words We need to have a talk when I get home I could hear the garage door creaking loudly and my father walking up the stepsI grew up in a strict Portuguese household I never had sleepovers I never went to the movies with friends and under no condition have a boyfriend let alone have any guy friends Family was the number one priority to my parents My brothers and I would wake up go to school go to soccer practice and at the end of every night have a homemade meal together I always loved being close to my family but not being able to do things with my friends was a little tough By the eighth grade my same group of friends would never invite me anywhere because they knew my parents would say noSo there I was sitting in my living room just waiting My dad still dirty from work decided to take his time and get a drink from the refrigerator Im sweating profusely and about to cry as my dad sits next to me He and I have always had a good relationship but at this point of my life I felt as if we were distantWhere were you a couple of days ago Natalie my father asked me Dad I went to Peter J to watch a baseball game Mom drove me there while she was running errands I said quickly Who were you withMy friends from school Alyssa and ReneNot what I heard he said angrilyIt was the championship game Yankees verse The Red Soxs at the
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